Nowadays people are confronting with different kinds of problem which lead them not to have enough time to rest. So, they are always looking for some methods helping them achieve relaxation. There are some methods recommended by different researchers to people in order to relax. There is a drastic contrast between different people on whether it is better to do some physical activities or watch a movie or read a book to relax. Although it is contradicted by many that doing physical activities would induce people to tiredness and exhaustion, I inclined to believe that doing some practices and physical tasks is an appropriate way to relax. I would state some reasons supporting my idea.
In my opinion, the first and most important reason is that it is approved that doing physical tasks would cause people not to only be physically healthier but also affects their mental abilities and skills. Doing some practices like aerobics, running, etc. would increase oxygen stream in brain. Enhancing the amount of oxygen in brain indicates some positive effects on people mental strength. A scientific research undertaken by University of Toronto has asserted that individual’s' rest times in positively correlated with how much people have increased and trained their mental abilities. Thus, it can be resulted that mental powers ensuing physical activities would help people to rest more.
Furthermore, another reason which has to be considered is that the experiments have shown that people during doing physical task do not think to any other topic or idea. Physical activities would help people not to think about any other problem they are confronting with in their life. People definite relax times as times they are far away from overthinking and unsolved questions. Hence, as I said physical advantageous such as distracting people from other issues would be considered as a valuable and profitable way to rest. To illustrate more when I was working on my thesis I really needed some times to rest, but I did not find any method practical. When I talked to a doctor, he asked me to do some practices. It really works for me and after that, I profoundly perceived how physical acts can effect on people having some effective rest times.
Drawing upon the reason -- increasing mental health -- and -- distracting people from other aspects of life --, although there always some exceptions which are excluded from the general rule, I am to a large extent on the belief that doing physical activities is a magnificent method to channel people to rest. It is recommended to psychologist to do a sturdy study on how different tasks would help people to rest more efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, really, so, thus, as to, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09750566893 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77258569032 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485260770975 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4578647376 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.047619048 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178296755112 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659585176409 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812368999877 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127264248822 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573716275025 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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