Since the dawn of civilization successes in our life played vital role in each society. Nowadays, many are adamant which a myriad of element should be taken into consideration in order to examine its constructive and destructive facets of this matter. Some people may hold the view that being success is felt good and motivate us. However, others take an opposite view and consider that one cannot be successful every part of life so we should learn to put up with failures. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and the lines below will shed light on my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to mention to say that there are many times which makes me happy when we accurately finish it something like school graduations or reaching high point at work life or etc. Actually, these times make us exciting and prepare for us to the new goals. A vivid example which can be given to the subject is one of my own. I get a decent toefl scores which felt me that I am good at English and then I decide to start to my PHD after.
Secondly, in approaching this issue, apart from what mention above, there is another point which must borne in mind. Happiness without success prevent people from working hard. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics reveals by a recent research conducted at MIT University in the USA shows that hard worker white collars do not accept happiness without success. The research study has conducted between the businessman from same age group in hundred different corporate. They tend to work hard and enjoy their success.
To wrap up, one can conclude that the success are significant for us and they open gates to the new worlds. I consider that we should not remain optimistic if we are not successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the dawn of civilization successes in o...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have borne' or 'bear'?
Suggestion: have borne; bear
...bove, there is another point which must borne in mind. Happiness without success pre...
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Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... the businessman from same age group in hundred different corporate. They tend to work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55443533945 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2118479596 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131637157219 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436868951126 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474668958383 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823607991089 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274308798743 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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