Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are worldwide events happening every day. Some events are closely related to our daily life, while others don't. Some people hold the viewpoint that it is of great significance to know about events happening around the world, even if they won't affect our life. I firmly believe this viewpoint and i will explore the detailed reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, knowing worldwide events will teach us so many lessons. Take the outbreak of flu in the USA in 2019 as an example, it quickly swept away all the main cities in US. Hospitals were full of patients waiting for cure and thousands of people died of flu. Whenever i recalled this segment of history, I only saw the pains and lessons. This past memeory seemed unrelated to our daily life admittedly, but we can still learn so much experience from the reaction and rebuttal of American people. Despite the harm of the flu, the U.S. government issued corresponding policies and strategies at once. Almost all the hospitals in the U.S. strived to save patients' lives and offered medical care and a great number of citizens volunteered to help in the communities. As a Chinese, how the Americans react and unify during the disaster are what we need to rethink deeply.
Furthermore, it is a fact that many events happening in some areas won't influence our life, while we still need to get in touch with these news since we live a more and more open lifestyle. People around the world are bonded in some certain ways. It is undeniable that the world is no longer static and so many changes happen every day. If we ignore some valuable events just because they are distant from our lives, it is definite that we will fall behind the world's progress. Take Qing Dynasty as an instance, when the first industrial revolution happened in Britain, people in Qing Dynasty still lived a primitive life. No machines or science could be discovered on that land. The emperor of Qing Dynasty soon found their foolness of turning a blind eye to the development of industry after some wars. From what has been discussed above, acquiring the events around the world will make us keep up with the advancement of the world.
In a nutshell, there is no doubt that people should know the events around the world. Not only will they learn precious lessons and experience from these events, but they will also follow the development of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76076555024 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4267006759 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543062200957 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9553892122 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230393094513 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676506407199 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068928431494 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167805582614 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822039030328 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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