Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the comtemporary society, people get increasingly attached to others with the development of social medium and mobile phones. It is easier for others to observe or even disturb our livings via social apps such as twitter, Wechat, TikTok and so on. Under such circumstances, some people hold the view that the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Personally, I firmly support this viewpoint and I will explore the detailed reasons in the subsequent paragraph.
First and foremost, it is admitted that increasingly fierce competitions pervade all over the society. Everyone has to compete with others when they are asking for jobs, enrolling in top shools and even dating with boyfriends or girlfriends. There are so many people who feel depressed after failing in the competitions. Even for those who survive in the battle of competition, they feel extremely pressured and exhausted when confronted with a great amount of work. Therefore, staying alone will produce an opportunity for people to flee from the highly competitive atmosphere. People will be dedicated more to their own lives. For example, they can foster interests and spend time with their belovers. Relieved from the stressful workload, people will feel more comfortable to enjoy themselves.
Furthermore, people can utilise the time spent alone to rethink themselves. A large number of young people find themselves lost in the daily life. They cannot perceive clearly what they truly love and where they genuinely belong. Take my best friend Benny as an example, he chose mathematics as his major in the unniversity. During his college life, he spent 10 hours a day solving maths problems and he felt really hard to keep up with other genius in his class. He felt extremly perplexed about whether he should insist on studying maths. I recommended him staying alone and taking a trip to somewhere beautiful to relax. After his single travelling abroad, he fell in love with American cultures and he decided to choose English as his second major and aimed to be a historian. From his experience, we can easily conclude that spending time alone will produce the opportunities to rethink. In other words, we will know ourselves better.
Admittedly some troubles will emerge when we spend time alone. Perhaps we might miss some golden chances or emergent matters. However, I believe this kind of regrets will be replenished sooner or later once we truly relax ourselves and feel pleased.
In a nutshell, spending time alone will facilitate people to flee from the chaotic world and rethink themselves seriously. It is highly recommended that people should spend spare time interacting with themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19772727273 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72325366743 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561363636364 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7146927119 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7037037037 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2962962963 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2962962963 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167079081089 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475730815429 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558716823451 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104842661694 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410964204916 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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