Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Todays, relaxation and stress reduction are essential and inseparable from our potential to resume our life. Some individuals believe spending time with their friends and other peoples can help them to relax and reduce their life tension. However, in my opinion, the best way to be calm and decrease our stress is being lonely, there are two reasons why I think so.
The first and foremost reason coming to my mind is that the people around us are the cause of being us stressful. In other words, the people carry many problems in their life so when we spend time with them they want to talk about that issue also they transferring this feeling to us. Thus, this is not rational to spend time with individuals who are the reasons of the part of that. For instance, when I was in bachelor degree, after the rough day in university with abundant tension from our teachers about study I wanted to rest and relaxed. Nevertheless, when I would reach to dormitory, I should hear to my friend’s relationships problems with his girlfriends. I suffered from that because I did not have another choice to stay. Besides, his concern increase my daily stress. So, for encounter to my stress, daily I spending my time alone with walked in park or street for an hour to stayed away from his negative effect. This helped me a lot to passed extra stress and being relaxed.
Another noteworthy reason is that being alone help to rethink about issues. On the whole, all stress coming from expanding of our difficulties. When we have time to think about our problems and solutions for solve that, our mind will be free from harmful mindset as the preserve of unsolved stressful issues in our mind is cause of all our pressure. Thus, this is not gain when we are not alone because we do not have time to think properly in present of others. I remember WHO had a report about mind health that was a part of that mentioned about controlling of stress and how can we be relax. In this report, at first talked about people who do not have loneliness time even from their partner, it mentioned people should have lonely time to contemplate about daily life, and how can they find a way to escape from life pressure? The report points that, the individuals have a time at least half hour to think about their life lonely they have thirty percent lower anxiety. As consequence, they have a better controlling on their stress.
In conclusion, many people are in favor of the notion that being with other and sharing their thought help them to release their stress, while one of the reasons of they being stressful are existence of some of their friends and relatives, and they cannot find time to think properly at present of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...remost reason coming to my mind is that the people around us are the cause of being us stressful. In...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt tension from our teachers about study I wanted to rest and relaxed. Neverthele...
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Line 2, column 820, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
.... So, for encounter to my stress, daily I spending my time alone with walked in p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, at least, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6244813278 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41575484174 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441908713693 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3257537464 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166027126388 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606857861532 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378226262297 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120567549251 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035140149173 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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