Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Government’s funds can spend to improve society. There are abundant debates about which issue has a more priority to get more funds. Much people believe public transportation should consider more funds for that than internet access. However, I think, for two reasons, governor should approve to spend more in internet access.
The first and foremost reason coming to my mind is that internet has important role on education of society. In other words, There are numerous contents in internet which people can learn every want they want. Also, recently, More platforms has been created for this purpose especially for students such as: YouTube, Coursera, Academia, Udemy, etc. These platforms can be using every time and every where from contents which made on other countries. Besides that, with internet free circulation of information. For instance during the coronavirus pandemic, I could not travel to another city for participate in one of biology courses called cell culture, then I enrolled this course on one related course which present by Utah university in Coursera. I learned quickly without any needs to travel. Also, I learned that ever moment I wanted. Plus, this course had more quality than all courses teach in my country. At last, with small proportion of payment I got certificate of that course.
Another worthy reason, development of access to internet reduce transportation in cities and town. In the main, Internet access remove many unessential works that needs to go. For example in the past many people needs go to bank for pay bills, withdraw or deposit money, money transfer and many works which needs to go any office. Even the works done faster. I remember one article printed in daily report, The unnecessary movement in the city 70 precent decrease than ten years ago because government considers budget many years ago for creating networks and improving internet access in whole country. These access had many outcome people for shopping necessarily did not needs to go mall even supermarkets, for registering did not needs to visit office, and they did not needs to go bank.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that improve public transportation is important but for role of internet on education and reduction of movements in cities are two of many valuable reasons of improvement in internet can play a great role in life quality of people in society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: Many
... has a more priority to get more funds. Much people believe public transportation sh...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...YouTube, Coursera, Academia, Udemy, etc. These platforms can be using every time ...
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Line 2, column 395, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...e platforms can be using every time and every where from contents which made on other count...
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...people for shopping necessarily did not needs to go mall even supermarkets, for regis...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mall even supermarkets, for registering did not needs to visit office, and they ...
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Line 3, column 736, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
... supermarkets, for registering did not needs to visit office, and they did not needs...
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Line 3, column 776, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...needs to visit office, and they did not needs to go bank. In conclusion, there is n...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uable reasons of improvement in internet can play a great role in life quality of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10714285714 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64529377077 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543367346939 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2635947438 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278829700202 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818902408443 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676831899392 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190073355724 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645944584986 0.0645574589148 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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