There are abundant debates about student’s school issues. One of important argument is around talking about starting time of student’s school. Many parents and elder students believe later morning classes has better for students. In my viewpoint, the earlier starting class time has more benefit for student. I will elaborate my idea in following.
The first and foremost reason coming to my mind is that morning time is golden time for best performance. In other hands, the mind has better efficiency and get knowledge better rather the later time in afternoon. So, if initiate class later, part of class should hold in afternoon which students have not enough energy to listen their teachers teaching. Also, the early bird catches the worm. I remember when I went to school in childhood always teachers and other advisors talked about papers showed early morning best time for heavy courses which needs much focus for that such as: math, physics, chemical courses. Then, the school administrator most of the time in our school consider this research in planning for yearly class plan and always minor courses were in noon or afternoon.
The second noteworthy reason is that early class is great training for student in future wake up sooner in the morning. Especially, everyone wants to be successful should consider that all banks and administrates work during the day so the being early bird can be advantageous of successful people just look successful people as Elon Musk, Barak Obama, Robert Langer and many others who are prosperous in their works all have common points are early riser. A personal example, when I went school early wake up has been my habit. So, in the vacation also I got accustomed to that and got up earlier than other member of my family always in the morning we had fresh bread which I was taken before other woke up. Also, I had favorable time to do what I like to do but in school time as I did not have enough time I could not to do that. As result, after school I keep this great habit for myself. And also, I see great footprint of this manner on my life.
To put in nutshell, many people in favor of later time in morning for school student is better. But as reason mentioned above and many which is not. The early morning to attend school for student has better outcome and prepare them for future.
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Suggestion:
...at footprint of this manner on my life. To put in nutshell, many people in favor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, such as, talking about, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73594132029 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36989071813 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515892420538 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7793804465 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330150981587 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102996270418 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655930542472 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223710122264 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348732054418 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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