No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of spending your own time alone. If I were force to choose, I would definitely select spending my time with either my friends or my family. It is my firm belief staying with people can make many pros for my character for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, friends or family can presents enormous advices to slove any complicated problems facing you, so you can decline any stress push on you. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly infuenced by my own personal experience. Three years ago, I was working in a big company in my country, during these days everything was awesome, but in one day I faced a huge decision between stay in this company or go to another company in another country, but with low salary. There were pros and cons for each company, the first one high salary, but will not enhance for many years and its located in my country, in contrast, the second one located outside my country and has low salary, but will increase every year. Undoubtedly, I felt confused because I did not know what I should do because I was thinking alone. As a result, I consult my friends to give me some adviced to deal with this situation. Consequently, they present to me advice to go to the second company, right now, I am working in this recent company and I have a huge salary. If I took the decision alone, I would not found a solution.
Secondly, everyone has his own pressure, but with relations with other people you can decline any stress on you, so when you go with your friends you can have fun and entertainment. Drawing from my own experience. I have a fixed rule in my life to spend the weekend with my friends and family, thursday with my friends and friday with my family. However, in these days I talk with them about my problems, going with them to the cinema, play some games like football. Moreover, after finishing these activities with them, I feel better and every negative feelings or prussure will discharge.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that spending time with others is better than alone. This is because family or friends can give you advices to keep away in your life and going with friends to make activities remove any stress on you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'present'
Suggestion: present
... To begin with, friends or family can presents enormous advices to slove any complicat...
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Line 3, column 961, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...ation. Consequently, they present to me advice to go to the second company, right now,...
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Line 3, column 1117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ok the decision alone, I would not found a solution. Secondly, everyone has hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54394299287 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46647336093 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484560570071 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0078319394 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.277777778 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133574513278 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510305208627 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499655973151 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109830681532 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042163480373 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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