Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern world, with this hectic life, sometimes people need to relax and free their mind from daily problems. While some believe that the best way to get calm and relax is to be alone for a while, others think otherwise. As far as I am concerned, I totally believe that spending time with friends and family can really help people to relax and reduce stress. The reasons why I think so will be elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, spending time with friends and families helps people to have a good time and forget about their problems. When people have stress in life, they can spend a few days with their friends, and enjoy their companionship. My own experience illustrates this reality. About twelve years ago, I studied for about a year to pass the university entrance exam. In that year, I tolerated so much pressure. I had to study for at least ten hours a day, and it was so frustrating. After I took the test, I was so exhausted and stressed that I felt really hopeless. However, I went on a trip for several days with some of my close friends. We went to the jungle. We talked together, played card games in the tent, and even went for some horse riding. I had such a good time that I completely lost all those stresses that I had, and I literally forgot about the exam. It was such a good trip that now, anytime I have some stressful days, I know what to do, I go on a trip with my friends.
Second, sometimes we have stress because of some difficult situations that we are dealing with, and the way to get released from that pressure is by talking to people who have experience and knowledge about that specific matter. I mean, If something terrible happens to people, or they need to make some decisions, spending time alone will not solve the problem, they just think about it more and more until they get frustrated. Nevertheless, if they consult with someone, they may feel a lot better. For instance, a few years ago, I had to choose a job between three offers. I was so nervous since I knew that it would affect my future. The more I thought about it, the more I felt the pressure until I talked to my uncle that had experienced such a situation. He gave me some great advice and helped me stay calm. I chose an excellent job, thanks to his suggestions. If I had not talked to him, I could choose a bad offer and ruin my future.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that people should spend time with their friends and families in order to relax and decrease stress. They will have an interesting time that helps them forget about their problems. Also, they can get valuable advice in bad situations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, while, at least, for instance, i mean, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44489795918 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43791377483 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481632653061 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.431922956 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7857142857 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161146342312 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405475781625 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500537681199 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117890491424 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464445872565 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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