Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Friends are a vital part of our life, that influence what we are today and what we will be tomorrow. Personally, I concur with the given statement that it is important to keep our old friends than to create a new one.
First of all, It is very hard to secure a close friend. To be close with someone there should be similarities in behavior and thinking of each other. My own personal experience is a compelling case of this point. When I was in high school, I had a hard time making friends who were comparable to me and who understand my feeling. Even so, I made a friend who has similar thinking and taste as I have. Of course, there can be many friends who are connected through different activities in our life like studying in school, playing a game and so on. I believe that it takes time for this friend to be attached closely to our life.
Secondly, It takes a long time to establish a strong bond with a friend. It can be easy to make companions whom we meet just by hanging out for a while. However, For these friends to be the best of all need to have a powerful bond. For example, My brother has got a friend who is always together with him for more than 5 or 6 years. I have seen them hanging out together from going to school to trek in the holiday. I think that they have been so close because of the strong bond they have established for a long period in their life. I can say without a doubt that if my brother tries to make a new friend then, it will be tricky for him to find the one like his best friend.
Finally, Friends creates a great influence on our life. It is said that we are the average of 5 peoples that are close to us in our life. To illustrate the example of this, let’s take an impact on me because of friends I have in the technology industry. Being a software developer, I have got best friends who are involved in the tech industry as well. Having a friend who has a similar goal in life has urged me to move forward in my life to pursue my dream.
In Conclusion, It is crucial in our life to keep our old friends who keep on supporting us rather than making a new one. Admittedly, We are free to create new friends but, as of now, we know that it takes a long time for us to find the right friend who bonds with us utterly. So, I am of the mind that it is essential to keep our old friends than to make a new friend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09442060086 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34031544615 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437768240343 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0096433396 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16401032049 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605586995882 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533594628519 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116981739019 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532667806435 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 10.9000537634 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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