TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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new Roman";"> To begin with, studying in other countries is a difficult time, especially non-native students, so if they make relationships with new friends who are native students, it is a good option for a living of non-native students. For example, a non-native student began studying in the United States of America in a master's degree program. In the first month, he had many problems with adapting both culture and living; however, after he tries to make relationships with new friends who are native students to fix his all troubles. Then, he is so happy with learning.
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new Roman";"> second of all, in the business world, new friends are a crucial influence on modern business. following the famous quote, "know who first, know-how second." For instance, a sale man needs to contact with new friends to support marketing. The more he know new friends, the more he succeeded in his business, especially social network businesses and websites.
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new Roman";"> Last but not least, new friends may help to make the right decision on some complicated troubles because of different attitudes and closing with an environment. For instance, a businessperson would like to invest in mine jewelry in an abroad area. Therefore, he should make some relationships with new friends knowing the environment and living in that area to advise him for his business.
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new Roman";"> All in all, we can conclude that having friends is an important thing in all stage of their living, so we should keep some relationships both new friends and old friends to prepare for future when we have more problems and cannot make decisions by ourself. friends may help us in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
...r supporting my viewpoint as follows. new Roman'; min-height: 15px;'>...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...ying in the United States of America in a masters degree program. In the first month, he ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
.... Then, he is so happy with learning. new Roman'; min-height: 15px;'>...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
...a crucial influence on modern business. following the famous quote, 'know who first,...
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Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...iends to support marketing. The more he know new friends, the more he succeeded in h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
...ial network businesses and websites. new Roman'; min-height: 15px;'>...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
...area to advise him for his business. new Roman'; min-height: 15px;'>...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Friends
...s and cannot make decisions by ourself. friends may help us in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47175141243 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65574815294 2.67179642975 137% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505649717514 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.438753048 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.357142857 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194882661982 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926874628891 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694181608879 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981300100726 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778614511473 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.