Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
family: "Times New Roman";">many class="young">young adults may like to class="live">live alone; however, class="some">some class="other">other class="young">young adults class="prefer">prefer to class="live">live with their families. This answer depends on the lifestyle of each class="person">person. For class="my">my prospective, I class="prefer">prefer to class="live">live with class="my">my family, and I class="have">have three commonly reasons for supporting class="my">my viewpoints: to convenience, to class="save">save expenses and to class="make">make class="relationship">relationship with a family
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family: "Times New Roman";">First of all, most class="young">young adults are class="still">still study in universities or schools, and they need to concentrate mainly on their classes, including doing their homework class="almost">almost every day. class="after">after finished form the studying, they are practically exhausted and bored to class="do">do class="other">other activities class="such">such as washing their uniforms, cleaning room, or cooking class="some">some class="food">food. These are class="some">some examples of living alone. On the class="other">other hand, If they class="live">live with their families, they barely class="have">have any work to class="do">do in their class="home">home because their class="home">home has convenient tools or a servant to class="support">support their lives.
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family: "Times New Roman";">Without a doubt, class="almost">almost class="young">young adults class="have">have a little money because they class="have">have class="still">still studied in their colleges or universities, and they class="have">have requested money from their parents. Consequently, they class="should">should class="save">save all expenses to class="help">help their parents, class="such">such as living expenses, class="food">food expenses, including electric and water bills.
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family: "Times New Roman";">Finally, living with family class="can">can class="help">help fun and relax when class="young">young adults feel lonely and bored. living, many persons class="can">can create more activities, especially in their families. For example, class="after">after finished class, class="some">some students always class="do">do several events with their families, class="such">such as they class="can">can play basketball, soccer, or badminton at the sports club with their families. Moreover, living with family has class="still">still helped a good class="relationship">relationship between parents and their kids.
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family: "Times New Roman";">In conclusion, from the above all reasons, I completely agree that class="young">young adults class="should">should class="live">live with their families because of more benefits in case of convenient in their lives, class="save">save all expenses and making good relationships with their families.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Family
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...nship between parents and their kids. family: 'Times New Roman'; min-heigh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3688.0 1977.66487455 186% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.418079096 4.8611393121 214% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.2096167753 2.67179642975 382% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485875706215 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 949.5 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.51630824373 178% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.717822228 48.9658058833 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.692307692 100.406767564 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0708713212605 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577653626201 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285902513321 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042219220229 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421512762501 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.3 11.7677419355 351% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -48.99 58.1214874552 -84% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 10.1575268817 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 43.45 10.9000537634 399% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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