Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
undoubtedly, making relationships with other people is beneficial and could always advantage both sides if they are in the correct way of connection.in this regard, while some people believe that it is better to make more friends, others stand on the opposite side, and hold this opinion that keeping old ones is more significant. I, personally, think that there are so many advantages in creating a new friendship with different people. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First, the foremost reason for the above notion is that interacting with other people always learn one some crucial lessons, so the more the number of relationships, the more experiences one could get. If a person has many friends with diverse capability, these friends can help him or her in a vast range of problem that may face with him or her. For example, my uncle has so many friends, and always when he gets into trouble, one of his friends helps him and solves his problem. Because of this cause making new friends is of great importance.
Second, another important reason for the dominance of having many friends over just keeping an old friendship is providing a different chance to be entertained. Nowadays in the modern and complicated world, people tolerate a massive pressure from surrounding events like some news about the corruption of politicians that is added to the arduous time in the workplace, so individuals need friends to become relax and spend leisure time with them to reduce these pressures.
In conclusion, having considered the reasons and examples that are mentioned above, there are more benefits in having lots of friends than having a few of them. Due to the more experiences that are gained and more opportunity to become relax.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
undoubtedly, making relationships with other people...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iends helps him and solves his problem. Because of this cause making new friends is of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d and more opportunity to become relax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97009966777 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70550228381 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7117621386 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22072247721 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839863877896 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318669613435 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129701367422 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185290787745 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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