Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having friends is one of the important characteristics of social people. When you are in a modern society you have communication with a lot of people which create opportunity to make friendships. Some people keep their friends for several years but others make new friends. In my opinion, keeping old friends is more important than making new friends for two important reasons.
The main reason is that old friends know each other better than new friends. When your friend knows about your traits and characteristics, he can help you better during your difficulties and also he will try to not bother you because he/or she knows how to treat you. For example, during university studies I made some good friendships that I keep them until today. After more than ten years being together we know each other well and give a hand in any situation. I remember that two years ago when I was supposed to buy a car I couldn’t gather enough money to buy my favorite sport car, and so I decided to buy a typical car instead. When one of my old knew about my money problem with a background that I like sport cars he lent me some money to buy my favorite car without my request. As you see, old friends can you help you in a condition that you don’t anticipate any help, because they know your traits and characteristics.
Another reason is that you can trust old friends more. Based on experience you have gotten in your relationship you know that how much you can trust your friend. Having a friend which you can count on him, gives you a powerful confidence in your life. For instance, last year one of my close friends came to me and said about his problem which he couldn’t share it with other friends and also family members. Because the problem was about his relationship with a girl that no one was knowing about her. He told me his problem and I tried to help him to pass the challenges. This example illustrates that keeping old friends that you can trust them could be your leverage.
In conclusion, I believe that although making new friends is significantly important, having your old friends by your site is even more important. The old friends know your traits and characteristics and can give a hand in many, many ways, and also You can trust them which you can share your particular or secret problems. Finally I feel that good old and new friends are the most effective people in our life which we must be meticulous about choosing them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61958997722 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63826560655 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453302961276 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8685207432 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338825022536 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129907934747 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090028340277 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248729590671 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384153142218 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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