Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this world of internet and information, I agree that it is more important for the government to spend more money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation.
To begin with, internet is crucial to online education and meetings. There are many schools shifting their courses from offline to online nowadays because of low cost, more convenience and the fairness (providing more high-quality education sources to students from rural area). Especially during the coronavirus outbreak, most schools around the world have been closed and all the courses have been taken online through ZOOM or other platforms. Students who live in remote area where there is bad internet connection may disconnect and have to drop from the school. Actually, one of my classmates is from a village where there is no internet connection, and until more than two months after the beginning of last term, she has finally had the internet connection but has passed half of the course.
In addition, internet is a very important way to get information. A decade ago, the most important way to access to information is newspaper, but right now people rarely buy printed newspaper and choose to get information via Twitter and Youtube. Digital gap, the gap between people who are familiar with internet and people who are foreign to the tech, is one of the most serious problems around the world. In the past, the reason why people are in different social classes was wealth, skin color and family background, but now is the familiarity towards the internet. Because through internet, people can immediately know what happened in a corner of the world, and that kind of information is the advantage and the power.
Finally, lack of internet may bring about more inequality and even death. Many countries including the U.S., Great Britain, and India are trying to establish digital health countries, which means using technologies to upload residents' information like fingerprints, income, health condition into ID cards. Residents of lower income can get subsidies and food from local government by only swiping the ID card. But in areas where there is no internet connection, residents cannot successfully swipe their cards and then cannot get their remedies. The Guardian once told a true story in India going that a man starved to death because of the failure of getting food from Indian government because of the bad internet connection in the village he lived in.
All in all, now internet is everything, and our lives cannot leave the internet. Government should pay more efforts to improve internet access in order to build a more equal world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, may, so, then, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11264367816 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68630698371 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9239576615 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.555555556 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217229213307 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757784102775 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1085984083 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175775187372 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160164249549 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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