As every thing in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. after all, any and each topic or question requires carful deliberation that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that having new friends is more important that old friends, I strongly believe that such opinion lacks coherence to some extant. in my humble opinion, I think keeping old friends is more important than making new friends.
First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that keeping old friends can results in favorable ramifications. The main reason behind this rationale is that old friends can give there friend the advice that they want to hear from them because they know each other very well. To illustrate more thoroughly, couple years ago, I had a problem which I want to apply for my dream job in CVS as a pharmacist, but there is no position at that time, So I apply to another job in other company and I enjoyed it very well and then I upgraded to a manger. After a while, I got an position at the same place that i wanted before to work at. I was so confuse and it was so hard for me make a decision. I asked my close friend to help me and she told me that i have to stuck in my position and never change it, because its will be so drastic to start from scratch, so I did exactly what she advised me and I was totally right. All in all, we can not and should not overlook that the keeping old friends is more important than making new friends.
On top of this, old friends can help in solving the problem that their friends have with honest and confidentiality. In the eye of many people in present day society, that old friend can hold secretes without telling anyone. For example, my cousin had a friend for more that 10 years. His friend is honest, helpful and so kind, but unfortunately, he passed away couple months ago because of COVID19. My cousin can not trust no one right now because he lost his best, honest friend. Long story short, its clear as a day to me that old friend can support their friend and helping solve their problem and so hard to replace them.
In summation, yes, its virtually impossible to provide a complete satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out on a given assay topic, we can come to a mutual agreement that having old friends is more important than making new friends due to the reasons and details mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, after all, as to, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47402597403 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43470319583 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521645021645 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.924553 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.789473684 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3157894737 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286182694733 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101504879813 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933848071804 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19046222534 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154257032523 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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