I believe that old friends are important to keep as they know us from very long time, we can share anything we want to. We can take any life advice from them because we believe in them. However, old friends are important but meeting new people and make them our friend is also important for many reasons.
Firstly, old friends are your best friends and you can share deepest and darkest part of your life with them. Moreover, in maany hard times you can ask them for help and their help. This is because we do believe in them. Whenever I face any difficulty in my life and if I am not able to tackle that, I take help from my old friend. I remember when I graduated, I did not have job and for that reason I was depressed. I talked about this with him and he gave me a book titled "secrets" which is about the law of attraction. That book helped me to come out of depression and gave enough motivation to keep hustling for job. After some days i got job because of that hard work.
To meet new people and befriend them is also a good thing since it is highly probable that them are from different part of the country or continent, culture, race. Because of this diversity we can learn their cultural values and we can adapt what is good in their culture but the old friend can also have different culture and we can learn so much from them. I have a Jain friend, in their culture they ask for forgiveness at the end of every year by saying "michhami dukkadam" which basically translates to please forgive me if i have hurt you. Even when they have not done anything wrong they say this so that the misunderstanding between people can be removed. Thus, by keeping your old friend you can learn a lot from them.
In contrast to my opinion, new people at work can help you with your work. I agree that some of my old friends do not share the same acedamic background as me thus they can not help me in my work related to software developement. Indeed, old friend might not help me in software developement but there are some life skills that they can teach us for example, I have a friend who taught me about investing in stock market which helped me to understand the deep meaning of saving and investing for future. It also explained me how it will help in bad economic conditions in life. Thus, we can also learn many skills from old friends.
A myriad of exaples discussed above shows that new people are good to have but keeping your old friends is more important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...member when I graduated, I did not have job and for that reason I was depressed. I ...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... keep hustling for job. After some days i got job because of that hard work. ...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of my old friends do not share the same acedamic background as me thus they can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38577586207 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46952949245 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441810344828 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2579974392 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223439371421 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084451786072 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928580709555 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164703605822 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493284454559 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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