Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy
Over ten billion of the world's population are jobless. An healthy society deems it fit that all individual irrespective of the age and social stratification secure a job in order to meet up with life's demand. It is critically important that this job should be guarded with all might because secure a job in recent time has been an herculean task. In my opinion I strongly feel that getting a job that is enjoyable is the best. This essay will provide veritable argument to this subject.
Looking at the view point of those who claim that high paying job is the best capitalizes their claim with the fact that high paying job exposes an individual to easy access of money "earn money faster" in order to meet up with life's expectations since this is one factor to look out for in selecting a job. To them it is Paramount that every individual venture into high paying job.
However it is no longer a debate that venturing into a job of interest over money is an exquisite and established idea to look out for in recent time because of several reasons such as peace of mind, minimal frustrated time while working and high productivity. Although there are some negative factors that accompany this choice but this limitations can't thwart the already established advantages. My personal experience is a compelling example to this claim. 5 years ago I was granted the opportunity to work for a bank in my residence although this profession "banking" isn't what I wanted in life and didn't serve as an enthusiastic part for me but because of the heavy pay and the fact that it is one of the lucrative job in town I had to Abaddon my previous job to work for them even though my previous job was not enervating as the bank job. However I started loosing my peace of mind which made me error prone, owning to this fact I had to resign and return back to my previous job. This experience serve as a gaurdians for me in choosing a preferred job.
Furthermore, engaging in job which is enjoyable makes one an elite in the field due to the fact the individual always want to be the best at what he does with less effort. For instance, the automobile company which I now work for proclaim me to be the best in my department. This didn't just happen because automobile engineering has always been my dream job and I really enjoy working there because of the sopheticated technology. Had I not follow my dream job I would still be stuck and wallowing in a prosaic bank job. Consequencially I advice the younger generation to venture into job not because of the pay but because of their fervid zeal towards the job.
In conclusion, after carefully juxtapositioning the merits of seeking job because of it's monetary aspect and seeking job because of the fervid passion. I vehimently agree with the claim that seeking job because it is enjoyable is the best
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
Over ten billion of the worlds population are jobless. An healthy soci...
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Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...n of the worlds population are jobless. An healthy society deems it fit that all i...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...se secure a job in recent time has been an herculean task. In my opinion I strongl...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...vidual venture into high paying job. However it is no longer a debate that venturing...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... factors that accompany this choice but this limitations cant thwart the already est...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ompany this choice but this limitations cant thwart the already established advantag...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ugh this profession 'banking' isnt what I wanted in life and didnt serve a...
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...ng' isnt what I wanted in life and didnt serve as an enthusiastic part for me bu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...job was not enervating as the bank job. However I started loosing my peace of mind whic...
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Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...owning to this fact I had to resign and return back to my previous job. This experience ser...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e to be the best in my department. This didnt just happen because automobile engineer...
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...n a prosaic bank job. Consequencially I advice the younger generation to venture into ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64763779528 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79839226825 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452755905512 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1580604419 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.05 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242397295847 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877540507775 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595417938727 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160419274347 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277897683516 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.