Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Research they say is the mother of invention. The world deems it fit for every society to carryout research especially scientific research and in performing this research it is critically important that the right materials are used in order to achieve accuracy, flexibility and efficiency. In my carrying out this research it is worthy to note that technological advancement has critical role to play most especially with the use of internet. To this end, in my opinion, I strongly feel that the internet is a force to consider as major source for gathering, collating and analysis of research-based information. This essay will provide veritable argument in line with this subject
From the view point of those proposing that printed materials is the best source of information for conducting research have their argument buttressed with the fact that printed materials such as textbook covers topic in a more detailed manner. To them, textbook are usually longer compared to online article and students who make reference to them uses the indexes which is included to focus on very specific topics in the textbook, making the course of the research experience less frustrating.
However, it is no longer a debate that the internet is the best in sourcing information in carryout research because it can be easily accesed and always provide genieu research base result. Although there are some limitations which accompany the use of internet as source of information for research purposes. Factors such as erratic power supply and cost of purchasing an smart gadget. Nevertheless if tend to appropriately this few factors don't stand as an hindrance to internet being the best source of information in research. My personal experience is a compelling example to this situation. Three years ago I was given a project task as part of requirements for graduation at my college of studies, my reliant on only printed materials restricted the quality of classified research information needed to produce a fine and detailed work, however my flaws were very obvious that my supervisor noticed and led to rejection of my work as a result assigning a lower grade to the work. Had I known earlier I would have consulted the internet
In conclusion, after carefully juxtapositioning the claims and drawing out a verdict. I strongly believe that internet is the best source of information in carrying out research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15601023018 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9727076651 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539641943734 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0811997155 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193208485919 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072142010189 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445853616411 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116735519202 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472732914579 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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