Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For me, I think it is better to use the internet instead of printed materials when doing researches. My reasons are as follows.
First, most people care about money, and using the internet to look for information can help people save a great deal of money. For example, people are able to do their own research via the internet without paying a single dollar. To be more specific, since most articles on the web are written my enthusiasts, people can read most of them for free. However, a printed book usually cost more than 50 dollars. Even if you borrow them from the library, in my country, you probably still need to pay 5 dollars per month in order to enjoy the service. As we can see, looking for data through the net can make you save a great amount of money.
Secondly, people generally place an emphasis on efficiency when they are researching things, and if they use physical book instead of the network, it can help them save a significant amount of time. To be more specific, if my mom and dad wants to plan a trip to Arizona, and they use Google to find tourist attractions in the state. Then, they only need to spend 5 seconds typing keywords in the search bar, and it requires less than 2 seconds for Google or Yahoo to display all the results they want. What’s more, they only need to spend 10 minutes perusing the top 10 search results. Nevertheless, if they choose to explore tourist attractions from book, they might need to spend more than 20 minutes driving to the library or book store, another 20 minutes filtering out the books they need, and yet another 20 minutes studying them.
Finally, most people want to get as much information as they can, and if they search for data from printed books, they might not be able to do so. To elaborate, when I was in college, I once used books and articles in the library to search for an unpopular research topic, and I was not able to find a single book covering it. However, by utilizing the google search engine, I could retrieve more than 1000 articles in just a single search. Clearly, the advent of web technology allows people to get a myriad of data, even if the knowledge is unpopular.
In conclusion, I suggest that when people are investigating some knowledge, they should definitely take advantage of the internet. This is because people care about money, efficiency, as well as procuring as much data as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ey, efficiency, as well as procuring as much data as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58372093023 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48152611848 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493023255814 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0587866028 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.736842105 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6315789474 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176971016081 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636837427877 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674604021367 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127611535334 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932487646141 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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