Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It’s better to have rules about the type of clothing that
people wear at schools or in their workplace.
It is widely accepted since the down of civilization cloth has played a significant role in human life. The question which arises here is whether same uniform in school or workplace is good idea. The answer depends on the lens through which one is looking and perceiving the word.
I, nonetheless contend the more similarity and discipline the more prosper. In the following paragraphs, two conspicuous reason will cogently illustrate this perspective.
The first remarkable reason to be mentioned is that rules about uniform in work not only makes people professional but also gives the Impressive initial view because it shows integral and correlation between the members of firm or pupils in school. Moreover constraints for some type of cloth declines the conflict among different social classes as a result people can concentrate on their work so they are more successful. There is also the fact that in all around the word highly-skilled job or decent job has some rules for clothing. The statistics revealed by a recently conducted research in the Masachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT) shown that every organization that has same uniform or some rules about it are more successful furthermore employee feels more comfortable and happier.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that gear people to work or school is time consuming so if there were rules about it we don’t need spent a lot of time for thinking what I should wear every day. In addition with no rules people tend wear different cloth each day but its not economical so it maybe bring about competitive vibe for employee specially for students which are in sensitive age. Beside that some people tend to wear revealing cloth which it makes a lot of problem such as distract other person also maybe induce sexctuall issues. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. One day I had an interview for a job and I decided wear a mini skirt but I confused which color I choose or what kind of shirt is better eventually I realize on of the obligation for this job is formal dress for women include white shirt and black pants so I feel comfortable in the interview because I know my cloth is like other employee and suitable for this place. As a result had they don’t have rule about cloth, I would have wear bad cloth and loos this job.
Finally, by taking all the mentioned points account, one will undoubtly draw the conclusion that regulate some role about cloth is workplace and school has a lot of benefit. In fact there are a myriad of reason, supporting the above statement, which could be mention but are embraced owing to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, i feel, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84868421053 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6931172819 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530701754386 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1997074782 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.058823529 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8235294118 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242965432833 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707026998741 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589215977851 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105319647771 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568544204711 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.