Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Knowledge is one of the best tool that we can have in our lives. It helps us to get over difficult situations and without it, we may not be able to survive in some risky occasions. Even thought some people state that knowledge got from personal experiences is better than those from the books, others think otherwise. In my opinion, knowledge from books overcomes the personal experiences one.
First of all, what it is explained in books is the essence for life. For example, if one wants to learn physics, he should read original books from Isaac Newton. One of my teachers read them and currently he is one of the most renown physicists in the world.
Furthermore, the knowledge obtained in books is more valuable than in laboratories. Our grades are made 70 percent more from theory than from laboratories, which make theory better than personal experience. That also explains why we are overwhelmed by books in the beginning of each semester.
However, there are some rare circumstances where we may learn more from experience. For instance, when an engineer decides to build a house but something unexpected occurs. Thus, he/she corrects the mistake and teaches his/her pupils how to recover it in university.
Finally, knowledge from books will always overcome that from personal experience. Moreover, books come first the experience. It would be redundant to say that personal experience comes first.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0643776824 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74431890717 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.533915411 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.75 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268297515244 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934416929489 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075837937961 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148309105816 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078658730476 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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