Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A leader should have a strong opinion and should not change his or her mind.
“A leader is one who knows the way, goes the way and shows the way.” To enhance leader’s ability, there are many ways can be employed. In terms of leader’s opinion, what is the best choice for them? Among the following statement, I would totally disagree that a leader should have a strong view and not change their mind.
To begin with, if leaders listen to other’s advice, it can help leaders to discover the problem. Take me for example. I work in the coffee shop, and there are full of customers during the lunch time which makes us a lot of mess. Hence, I told to my manager that if we could hire more clerks that we can definitely focus on our jobs in our position. Eventually, my manager took my advice and the operation of coffee shop is no longer in such rush. Therefore, hearing others idea can realize where the problem is.
Moreover, discussion often leads to a better consequence. To be more exact, an excellent leader will discuss the target with other company’s supervisors and team members to determine the final policy, and the result generally would be benefit. On the other hand, if a leader insists his or her mind and do not want to accept other’s view, the result of decision will be highly risky.
Last but not least, listening to follower’s opinion can make them to have more motivation in works. To be more concise, some leaders will ask their employee’s suggestion to decide the ultimate way of doing things. For instance, I read a time magazine’s statistic shows that if the supervisor adopts the staff’s recommendation, 87% of the staffs will be more ambitious than before and will achieve their goal more efficient.
In brief, due to the reasons described above, I am positive that a successful leader should depend on the different kind of things to change their thought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in brief, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85849056604 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84366637143 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7188602468 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213119129463 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073117675242 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110149503154 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116872402217 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714722461588 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.