Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Leadership is a vital aspect nowadays as the competition is growing in every working sector. In my opinion one can be a good leader if he/she learns how to uproot themselves professionally. The following points enlisted, are in favour of the same.
Firstly, people advance their career from zenith and with great dedication some gets promoted to lead a team. The leader improves its skills day by day either personal or official. One of my friends started his career as an executive in brand marketing. He presented the organisation at various business events. With his enthusiasm and diligence, he got promoted at regular intervals. He explained to me that if you are improving your work ethics, communication and behaviour among people, you can become a good controller and leader of a team.
Secondly, no books can make a person a good leader. But daily hard work, commitment are the attributes which enhances their road to be a commandant of the group. One of the great scientists and former president of India Dr APJ Abdul Kalam, was born in a poor family. He did his schooling along with working and helping family by earning some money. He increased his inner and working strengths since his childhood and lately in job. He lead the various satellite programs in India and afterwards elected as the president of the same country.
Adding more, India won the cricket world cup in 2011. The captain played the heroic innings and lead the team to lift the trophy. He worked hard over his team, trusted the members, motivated them frequently and honed them with a vision to conquer this game format. Some of the member from same team, are now leading the group further.
In conclusion, I would like to state that leadership comes after great experience, dedication towards work. No one can teach you to be a good leader only your experiences, efforts and focus can.

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Average: 6.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... since his childhood and lately in job. He lead the various satellite programs in ...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
...nce his childhood and lately in job. He lead the various satellite programs in India...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...h a vision to conquer this game format. Some of the member from same team, are now leading ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.859375 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6607957427 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8108347814 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0476190476 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2380952381 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142285670782 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399065815081 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419574708869 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930960667069 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558376949672 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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