Has human harmed the earth or made it a better place?
The advancement in the technology has lead to improved life style and ease in our daily routines. The industrialisation, updated scientific methods, various modes of transportation has deep rooted in our lives. It clearly is a boon to the people. But the regular use has imbalanced the earth’s condition on seeing the present scenario. The humans have added pollution into the earths’ environment which is leading to global warming and excessive use of natural resources. The following points are worth supporting to the topic.
Foremost and striking point is the pollution from automobiles has resulted in the degrading the air standard which we breathe. It out came as problems in inhaling air, coughness, problems to lungs or skin related troubles. Adding more, the sound pollution also resulted from transportation ways which has caused the irritation, problems in hearing, headaches and number of prolonged ailments. The industrialisation draining harmful chemical waste in water resources like ponds, rivers has lowered the quality of water. Also this water when used for irrigation purposes, has affected the soil and fertility of soil is thrashed.
Secondly, gases from industries into the atmosphere has increased the level of carbon dioxide, nitrous oxides and other harmful gases. This has raised a serious issue of global warming which has altered the climate in various parts across the globe. The delay in rains affected the cultivation of crops in many regions and also letting in dryness of natural resources of water. Uplift in temperature causing ice among the glaciers to melt and endangering the species rely in cold. The depletion of layers like ozone, stratosphere which filters the sun rays and allow only the ones essential for our living, has caused many skin related problems and affecting ecological balance.
Adding more, the technology has also given harmful and dangerous weapons, which are fatal if used by every country. This can bury the whole planet and let remains over here. The proven example when whole world experienced two world wars and also attack on Hiroshima and Nagasaki, during the end of Second World War. This actually is a major concern and threat to earth and single person living on this planet.
In conclusion it can be summed up that humans are sole responsible for the worsening a beautiful and amazing earth for its own benefits and thereby leaving a place which the coming generations might not be able to see.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2075 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78283915274 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3540845814 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1904761905 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112045399368 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026547028633 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041085097994 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635889024695 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413016059267 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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