Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children?”
The arrival of the 21st century has brought many changes in our lives; that is, in the way we work, in our daily activity, and the way we do business. It offers certain advantages, such as a higher standard of living and great technology advances. Things that were almost impossible in previous years, today are more conventional and of great acceptance. For this reason, I agree with the statement that life today is more comfortable and easier than it was when my grandparents were children. I will get into that in the following paragraphs.
First, advances in technology have widened the way we approach society. The development of the smartphone, for example, allow families and friends to stay in touch and communicate from very far locations, sometimes in another continent. And not only to communicate, but smartphones are very useful at work and while studying. While using your phone, you can download the UBER app and request a food delivery to your house or office, or maybe solicit a ride if you feel tired or do not want to drive. Technology plays a major role and no doubts your live has become easier than years before. We should be grateful for that.
Secondly, globalization has made our lives happier and more connected since we can travel abroad whenever and wherever we want. The flourish of the society in the new century has produce better communication in a way that didn't exist before. People can travel more, and not only for vacation purposes. Also, to study, facilitating a broad knowledge about political, religious and environmental issues. Several years before this opportunity was only for the most fortunate, the richest. Additionally, traveling facilitates that friends can be visited, and families can reunite, especially in important festivities, because travel time is less. Things easy to accomplish because of modern transportation.
Finally, the standard of living has become higher. More people can study and work at the same time. With the progress of the society, more and more families can buy a new home, or a new car. Moreover, people in general can have greater expectations in life because they can save money and plan vacations ahead of time. People in general have more access to health services and education. This is very important if you have a family to support. What seems impossible or remote years before, today is more affordable and easier to accomplish.
All in all, for all those reasons mention above, I consider that life today is more easy, enjoyable and affordable than it was years before. The development of the society in many aspects can prove that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in general, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76912781352 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0779882189 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206176263718 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505301027678 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919504833823 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117768656284 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08745220097 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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