Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, everything is different from the past. Our grandparents had a different life compared to how we are dwelling now, thanks to a society full of freedom. So, I agree with the statement, and I feel this way for the following reasons.
First of all, life in the past was not easy and not peaceful, because there was a war going on, not to mention the scarcity of food. During the war, all-male were demanded to participate in military activities, even the youngest ones. In 1939, our country had a war with Japan and almost all the soldiers died, even though we accomplished a victory. On top of that, the food supply was not enough for every people in the country, because some of the people had worse living conditions. They had to buy some food materials for high prices that they could not afford it. So, life during our grandparents' life was demanding and hard.
Secondly, technology innovation modified society. With a smartphone, we can connect to our friends or families from every part of the world, in contrast to the past. Because there were no inventions like phones, people communicated with each other by handwritten mails, which took too long to deliver, and some of them were lost on the way. In addition, some young people were illiterate, due to lack of schools and strict society. My grandmother told me that she learned to write and read when she was almost a teenager because women were not allowed to learn education at that age. But now, every person, regardless of their age can gain an education. If there were no freedom and technology today, we will be living in not the same life.
In conclusion, our grandparent's life was harder than we imagined, because there was no peace and not enough food. So, by creating innovation, it changed the course of our life for the better. Thanks to this, we are living a comfortable and peaceful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...or every people in the country, because some of the people had worse living conditions. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71556886228 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63580714259 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9872723996 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8947368421 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169746160757 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548157398021 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444359913578 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111454526999 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017926476395 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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