Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people think that the present life of youngsters is more complex and baffling, probably, because they are more indulged and live with digital and electronic games and virtual reality which leads the children more anxious and unsociable. I, however, believe that today's children's lives are more easier and convenient in comparison to my grandparents were young. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, lots of pieces of stuff are available to the world internet, games, digital appliances, and social media to play and share their ideas and feelings because these things give immense pleasure to young people. This platform gives the chances the children to burgeon their potentiality and strengthen their creativity. For example, my niece, who is very active to draw pictures on the digital board, engaged more and more in it so that even if her age is too low, she can draw beautiful paintings. In the contrast, in the generation of my grandparents, no availability of such opportunities so they might have lost learning such good things, which is more detrimental to enhancing creativity.
Secondly, many schools and educational institutions have made a variety of playing things like beautiful grounds, playing materials, gardens, and learning materials so that they can learn and develop their mind sharp. This means, in the appropriate environment, the children nurture their future. For instance, being provided lots of playing facilities, my small brother at the age of five years feels happier and more comfortable in school and hence his academic grade continuously growing in good manner.
Thirdly, due to awareness and application of education, the parents give the children lots of time to cherish and care for. In addition, the government also amendments the policies to develop children's rights. To illustrate this, our government brought good policies about the education such as free of cost to study upt higher secondary level, dinner and breakfast are freely available in the school. These things make the children happier to go to school regularly.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that modern children have great convenient and comforble life. This is because they have great furtune to learn or play digital material, more learning facilities in chool, and more care from parents as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...believe that todays childrens lives are more easier and convenient in comparison to my gran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26701570681 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7479829554 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2504093872 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127920612466 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468267868175 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456269006927 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772831897032 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617582731647 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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