do you agree or disagree with the following statement? life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were a child? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is very obvious that life is changing with time, and it is different than what it was in our grandparents time. In fact, there is always that question in everyone's mind, which life is easier, ours or our grandparents' life? In my opinion, life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, technology these days makes things easier than before, and it covers almost every field in our life. We had many choices for commuting, applications to make things easier, and infinite number of machines to use it in our daily bases. For instance, yesterday, I went to my grandmother house and spent my day with her. She made a delicious meal from scratch for me, which is something I rarely do for my kids. I always had frozen food to prepare or reheat. After the dinner, she told me a story about her childhood, and how going to school was a big challenge for her because she had to wake up without an alarm clock, which is something we have it in every phone these days, then she had to walk around three miles to arrive. When I compare my grandmother trip to my daughter trip, who spent five minutes by car to be in her school, I find that my grandmother suffered a lot for her education and in her life in general.
Second, connection between people was stronger in the past, that added an extra difficulty for them at that time. Because of this connection there were a lot of comparison between kids at the same neighborhood or from the same family, which increased the number of challenges that faced children. For example, when I was at my grandmother's house. She told me how her father used to tell her to be good as her cousin, and to be smart as her friend. For her as a small kid this way of talking added an extra load on her shoulder to be smarter or better so her father will be satisfied, and it made her life less comfortable for her.
To sum up, life today is easier and more comfortable than our grandparents' life not only because of Technology we have, but also the society connection in the past added extra difficulties for people at their time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...changing with time, and it is different than what it was in our grandparents time. ...
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Suggestion:
...me, and it is different than what it was in our grandparents time. In fact, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, in general, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42222222222 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54334172018 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491358024691 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8386451167 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.352941176 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192715652522 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832063859263 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895691062166 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168131596166 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112770946052 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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