TPO 19_ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that the number of news resources increased dramatically during the last few years. In the other hand, a person has to be well-informed in this century, so his knowledge will be at the same pace of the life in general. However, I believe that to achieve that efficiently, he must depend only on one resource that provide multiple kinds of news. I feel this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, depending on many news resources is going to affect the reliability of the information because each one is going to illustrate it from his point of view. For instance, last year, a team from our university attended a competition between many teams from all universities of the middle east. Fortunately, our team was the best, and they won the first place. All tv shows spoke about this achievement. In contrast, I used to watch a series in different tv channel. On that day, and after the end of
the episode, I watched their news, and it was a surprise for me, it was talking about the competition, and it said that our team cheated to win.
Second, having one resource for taking many different news is better in order to save your time. For example, I used to search about each topic I need to know about for hours, until I knew about a comprehensive website, that have updated news about the whole world. It really amused me. After I started getting my information from there, I had more time to work on my own business. In addition to that, I had the chance to save a weekly hour to visit my grandparent house.
To sum up, it is better for person to get his information from one resource rather than many different news resources not only because that could confuse him, and the news could be wrong, but also it might waste his time. That is way I suggest that people must choose one site and depend on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... competition between many teams from all universities of the middle east. Fortuna...
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Suggestion:
...annel. On that day, and after the end of the episode, I watched their news, and i...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different news', 'a good deal of different news'.
Suggestion: much different news; a good deal of different news
... Second, having one resource for taking many different news is better in order to save your time. F...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...about a comprehensive website, that have updated news about the whole world. It r...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...formation from one resource rather than many different news resources not only because that co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in contrast, in general, talking about, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46220930233 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54991907262 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531976744186 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8252319945 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247908489988 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692804338815 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658330955271 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130736748882 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609644322695 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.