Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that the person level of knowledge is very important these days, and it is not easy to be reached, consequently he has to work hard to achieve it. According to resources, I agree with the statement that in order for a person to be well-informed, he must get information from many different news resources, such as different website, news paper, social media, and books. I feel this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, relying on many sources means that a person can get multiple kinds of information. For instance, he can have information about animals from a documentary show, and a knowledge about world politics from a newspaper. When I take a look at young people in this century, I find that most of them are well-informed and highly educated, and all of this is because they have an easy access to many news and information resources. My brother Ammar is one of those young people. He is at his middle twenties, but when I compare myself at his age to him, I find that his knowledge is way better than me, and that is due to the lack of resources at my time.
Second, being well-informed does not mean to have a lot of information only, but also to be able to analyse, use, apply, and understand them, and since using many resources gives you different points of view for the same thing, it helps in improving analytical learning techniques. For example, my brother Ammar is reporter. Last year, he heard about a conflict in a country next to us, but he was smart enough to not depend on one source for his news. He collected his information from both sides of the conflict, so he was able to present a perfect report about it, and he got the prize of the year for the best report from his company.
To sum up, a person must get information from many resources not only because he will be able to learn about different kind of things, but also it will improve his ability to understand things around him.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...-informed, he must get information from many different news resources, such as different websi...
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Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...s resources, such as different website, news paper, social media, and books. I feel this w...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...d, and all of this is because they have an easy access to many news and information resources....
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... is because they have an easy access to many news and information resources. My brot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, second, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48066298343 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63949661887 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522099447514 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5552513321 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301089695504 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104098878337 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10940521351 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204367449632 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571376647045 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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