Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people think that some news resources are best to get information. Personally, I believe that using different resources to get informed is better choice for me. I feel this way for several reasons, I will explore in the following essay. Firstly, sometime media and channel wants to exceed from others and they telecast the news very quickly without confirming that it is true or not.Additionally, they add more information to increase their trp. My personal experience is compelling example of this. Yesterday my father was watching news on television, one of very famous news channel was showing that how many people died in pandemic.Although, they were huge in number. That channel was showing the wrong figure.Hence, I searched on my laptop and showed my father the exact news on other channel. So we realized that different channel have different news.Therefore, we realized different resources are needed to get well informed. Secondly, some people make it hard to reach authentic information to the people. Moreover, They do not have license to forecast news the just copy other fake sources. On the other hand, some sources search and take good care of truth to bring to the people. For instance, my friend was working as a news caster. I was so impressed that he is so talented and hired for this job. One day I got a chance to visit him. He added that there are lot of steps to get an exact news. Furthermore, he explained a true story of an accident , he and his cameraman reached on the spot.However, he searched on internet and find the news, evidently, it was totally changed on the other sources. As a result, he edited the news with correct information. If he had not edited and confirmed the news on internet, they would not have been able to know the correct information as well. In conclusion, I strongly agree that person must get information from all resources. This is because news channel only want to increase their trp and because to make news authentic you have to look at the different news or internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
...t different channel have different news.Therefore, we realized different resources are ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83753066163 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9488253179 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.15 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244141536584 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792101346827 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691260476013 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244141536584 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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