it is more important for government to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation support your answer with example

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: No
...ow vital internet is in everyone’s life.No one can deny the advantage that interne...
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Suggestion: I
...it which has made our lives much easier.I strongly believe that government shoul...
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...ives much easier.I strongly believe that government should spend money to improve...
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...access than to improve public transport.It’s my firm belief for the number of reas...
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Suggestion: , improving
...he subsequent paragraphs. To begin with,improving internet services especially in rural o...
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Suggestion: Internet
...g robbed off the advantages of internet.Internet has several resources which helps in en...
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...hich helps in enhancing one’s knowledge.I have to admit that my opinion on this m...
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...ly influenced by my personal experience.I live in village where internet access i...
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...lem came into the light during pandemic.Owing to the poor internet quality,I couldn’t...
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...demic.Owing to the poor internet quality,I couldn’t attend my online classes.This ...
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...ity,I couldn’t attend my online classes.This disadvantage badly impacted my exam gra...
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...d for exams without my online classes.so ,in order for students to have brighter a...
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Suggestion: , they
...o have brighter and obstacle free future,they must be provided with the internet acce...
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...ided with the internet access. Secondly,I believe that internet can save our plen...
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...at internet can save our plenty of time.Through internet,we can get all the necessary i...
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...save our plenty of time.Through internet,we can get all the necessary information w...
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...in seconds by just sitting at one place.Going to library for collecting information a...
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...inding resources consumes a lot of time.Drawing from my personal experience,I remember ...
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...time.Drawing from my personal experience,I remember when I was too poor to afford ...
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...r when I was too poor to afford internet,library was the only reliable source for me to ...
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....since library was far away from my home,it consumed lot of time on traveling.By th...
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...me,it consumed lot of time on traveling.By the time I used to reach library,it wou...
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...ling.By the time I used to reach library,it would get too late.Consequences to this...
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... to reach library,it would get too late.Consequences to this,I was always left with very les...
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... would get too late.Consequences to this,I was always left with very less time to ...
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...in the library and complete my homework.These incidents always filled me with lot o...
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...e library and complete my homework.These incidents always filled me with lot of ...
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...lete my homework.These incidents always filled me with lot of discouragement .So...
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...ys filled me with lot of discouragement .So, to make people lives less difficult ...
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... filled me with lot of discouragement .So, to make people lives less difficult ,t...
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....So, to make people lives less difficult ,they should be given proper internet acc...
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... In the light of reasons mentioned above,I agree that government should spend mone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, as to, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47692307692 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17910932411 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.1344086022 402% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 267.253157138 48.9658058833 546% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 445.0 100.406767564 443% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.25 20.6045352989 394% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28079920765 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23980020026 0.076458572812 314% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127211425093 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23980020026 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127211425093 0.0645574589148 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 11.7677419355 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.2 58.1214874552 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 10.1575268817 355% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.0537634409 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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