Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when grandparents were children, while others do not. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views. If I had to choose one, I would say that the today’s life becomes easier than grandparents’ childhood.
To begin with, it is convenient to move from one to another place. When we want to go to another city in our home country or travel abroad, we don’t have serious inconvenience. However, when my grandparents were children, they were lack of transportation system which make them difficult to transport to another place. For instance, due to the long distance and lack of information, my grandfather couldn’t go to an unknown place even though he had to go. Meanwhile, we can visit diverse places by car, plane and various kinds of public transportation systems. By visiting different places around the world makes people to make friends and learn about other countries' cultures. From these changes, we can acknowledge that more transportation system made easy for people to travel or visit places which is beneficial for people’s enjoyment and relationships.
In addition, it is easy to contact other people. The relationship between people plays a significant role in daily lives. These days, we can make contact easily with our friends or family by using phones; however, anciently, it was difficult to have interaction and contacting others. For example, my grandmother and grandfather sent letters to each other which spent about a week to receive. They missed each other a lot but due to the limited chance of contacting, it was very hurtful moment for them. But, these days most of the couples are contacting each other easily by text messaging or phone calls. Also, people can have a long conversation with their family or friends. They can share some stories or worries which strengthens their relationships.
All things considered, I strongly believe that the convenience of the life today is better than the old days for the reasons I have mentioned above. All in all, improvement of transportation system and connection method cannot be underestimated for the convenience of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18005540166 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05292063927 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0264186008 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.05 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151238537631 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472861590457 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073045084279 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116973129494 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103429240325 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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