[TPO3] Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. use specific examples and give answer.
The relationship between people is one of the most important factors while living in real-life society. Even though there are kinds of relationships in society, the friendship between friends is the most considerable bond. Some people prefer to make new friends. However, in my opinion, it is more important to keep old friends than making new bond with other people. This is because the depth of the relationship and the conversation between people.
To begin with, the old friends knows me better. Friends who knew since the school days already knows about my daily life, habits, social relationships and other information about me. By using their background knowledge about me, they will also behave very seriously about my problem and give me some truthful and helpful advice to me from their real heart. For example, when my old friends telling some worries to me, I can give some realistic solution to her because I know her very well. The more information about friend can give some realistic advice which the friend can cut the cackle.
On top of that, I can share some secret stories to my old friends. According to the research from the korean university, about sixty percent of the people have answered that they are telling some secrets to their friends. Among these people, most of the participants replied that they are telling their old friends. In the society, it is necessary and very natural to make new friends with different kinds of people. However, people don’t have serious conversations with new friends and it is awkward to share some stories between them. By keeping some old friends with me, I can share some secret stories or some worries to my old friends. The deep relationship makes some relieved situations and advice given by old friends are very truthful than the other new bonds. I can get self-reliance by releasing truthful emotions to friends and telling some true stories.
To sum up, it is important to keep old friends than making new friends. The reason is that they have more background knowledge about me which gives me some real-life advice and we can have some truthful conversation between old friends. In this regard, I think it is more important to keep friendship between old friends by having some conversations and meetings than making lots of new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ociety, it is necessary and very natural to make new friends with different kinds...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97948717949 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59528348817 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402564102564 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7130158504 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4761904762 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269696385449 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118260160622 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101681247874 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203283450642 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669662625481 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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