Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better thanthey really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Advertisements are the sole matter of business. Without them it is not possible to buy or to sell goods to anyone. And, for sure, the appearance of the product is the matter of the process of making it easier or harder to sell. That is the way we are going to find when bying a product, but when we see the real one we realize that it is somehow different. It was better than now.
Firstly, we are surrounded by advertisements all around our neighbourhood. One trying to be better than the other ones. Trying to post better images. For instance, while commuting, we can see one outdoor about food. We may think not only about the food by itself but by the image. Then, we decide to stop the car to have the dish. By the time when it comes we realize that the food appeared so nicely on the outdoor but now so poor. Therefore, this is only one way to catch costumers' attention.
Secondly, when watching TV we see many news about clothes or electronics. We go to shopping centers to try those clothes and to pinpoint some details of the electronics but what we look at it is only a different version of what it was stated on TV. Thus, we were influenced by what we have been seen so far. In addition, when we enter in some shopping centers, we take a very quick look at some promotions and end up bying other products that we were not supposed to buy but the needed ones we end up not buying.
However, not every advertisements make goods seem better. As an example, I needed to buy a new computer for my office and it was hard to do it because of the configurations that it was supposed to have. I needed one which worked faster enough to have my deadlines accomplished by the end of the day and they were thousands of files to load. After spending long time looking for such a computer I saw one in an advertisement that matched the same qualifications. I went to the store then I realized that it was right the same that I was looking for. Then, I bought it and it solved my drawbacks.
Finally, advertisements will always try to catch our attention by making goods having a good appearance otherwise nobody will be able to buy or even sell products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...ion. Secondly, when watching TV we see many news about clothes or electronics. We go to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33663366337 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64268350363 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7292712424 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0634362687601 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265040675292 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412875948117 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435410985252 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023502498566 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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