Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better thanthey really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advertisement has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. I t influence in a direct and in an intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate its role because of its indelible effect on the society. Although some people hold the view point that advertisement never be successful unless the commodity that they advertise about have a good qualty. However, others may disagree with this notion and hold a different intellect. In my perception and actual life observation which has led me to agree with the idea that company use to pronounce on product have lower quality and produce to the people as perfect one. In the following essay, I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, most company try to change people notion and convinced them to buy their product by advertisement. Indeed, they will appear the product in perfect shape inorder to increase their pecuniary gain.Never taken into avccount the negative impact of some product. For instance, big bear company that advertise for cookies in a shape of bear. They attract a certain age, ehich are the children, Definitely, they use methods to pursue the kids and their family to buy it; therefore, to increase the company income financially.However, they never think of the kids health since these cookies include a myriad of sugar. This in turn, effect on the kids general and dental health. Apparently, it must be taken into account that the advertisement should br supervised by experts before been produce to public.
In addition, when the company reveal positively on their product, will enhance its reputation and send a striking notice to compatetion that their product are unbeatable. For example, apple company for modern technology ,it always use to appear their product in a good quality. They drug all the consumers to its commodity, since their advertisement appears the company and its product valuable and practical. Many people are use to buy their product without think of any other ulternatives becuase the company gave wide and trustable marketing name. In view of the fact that the method that use to advertise about the cell phone , I-pad, and so on was excellent to put the company in the first row in comparisom to others.
To sum up, after contemplating all factors that I mentioned before, taking all the reasons into consideration, I would reinfoce my idea that advertisement makes the product looks in better quality because the company try to convince consumer to buy them to increase their financial income and enhance the company reputation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09219858156 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83128516496 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527186761229 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5372516201 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.368421053 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143919163499 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466032882974 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290991271809 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942745856713 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215531796311 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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