Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Commands have tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to understand and value its effects because of their indelible impact on the society.Although some people hold the viewpoint that today's rules are more strict for adolescent. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My actual and personal observation of life, have led me to disagree with the idea that the rules today leave many space for young people than in the past.In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, in our contemporary society, the juveniles have plenty of freedom to do and follow their dreams with no attention to any rules.For instance, my young daughter, Maryam, when she turn sixteen years old she start to mention that she want to be you tuber. Although me and her father try our best to explain how hard this work are and it is better to gets her Bachlore degree first, since her father wants her to be a lawyer as him, but she never listen.She keeps telling that, she has the right to follow her dreams and no rule can stop her. Apparently, it must be taken into account that in the past we follow our parents and society rule whatever our dreams are.
In addition, today's law in all countries give the right to young people to be independent. In the past, whenever our age is, we should follow certain rules according to our family tradition, culture, and society. Today's youth never be under the pressure of these thoughts. furthermore, in the last decades, many countries gives the them the right to pursue their dreams and devote all their efforts to build their personality in independent manner. For example, all young people now could have the choice to continue their education in universities or search for job. While, in the past , this was hard to be done by the young people since the law never give them the right to do it. In view of the fact that many new laws and rules have been changed in the direction of benefit of young people rights .
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea thattoday's rules are more flexible than before . Accordingly, I believe that these new ruleshelp the young people to be more responsible and independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8102189781 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6128489482 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549878345499 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5806519661 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.294117647 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204178568344 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657531127675 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440026308453 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121508889553 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362588688778 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.