Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many issues in our life have an influential and fabulous leverage on it. It is utterly important to appreciate their indelible impact on our society. These important things encompasses our core and we need to do them perfectly. Although some people hold the viewpoint that finishing many tasks can be easily done perfectly.However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My life experience and actual observation of life had led me to agree with the idea that finishing these tasks need a tremendous efforts which may not be able to offer. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, many errands in the same time could not be done properly as we will lose concentration and mistakes will happened. My personal experience is a good example of this, similar to many mothers in this world, we are struggling between our jobs, fill our family demands, and collaborate in our social life with friends. during one of my company meeting with an important organization. I found my papers are filled with my little one drawing. I was barely can read the contract and fill in an embarrassing situation.I understand that I left my paper on the table when I was preparing dinner for my family which can be easily reached by my baby. Apparently, I could tell. doing many things will be surely one of them not done correctly.
In addition ,because of time management, it will be hard to achieve our goal . Furthermore, this will enforce us to finish what we have asked to done with many mistakes. These mistakes may have a negative consequence on our future. For instance, when my partner in the work take off one day. I have to done her and mine jobs. At the same day, I have two meeting which should prepare for them. At the end of the day, I felt sick and hard to continue. I try my best to done with all work correctly but I found I made big mistakes as I sent a wrong E-mail to a different company. This cost my company some money and my boss get mad of me.This further emphasizes the point that many jobs will be hard to achieve all of them perfectly.
Ina nutshell, judging all the reasons which I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I would reinforce my idea that doing many works will surely effects some of them and leads to many drawback because we will loss our concentration to finish it correctly and it is hard to control our time.
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... on our society. These important things encompasses our core and we need to do them perfect...
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...urely effects some of them and leads to many drawback because we will loss our concentration ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63594470046 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66961192881 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1292770673 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4782608696 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118625460099 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036302561676 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427002651964 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853608041142 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308264075971 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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