Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Happiness and satisfaction has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. Although some people hold the point view that people in the past are more comfortable with their lives than today. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My perception have led me to agree with the idea that, individuals nowadays are more happy than before. In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, today's technology have an influential impact in reduction the time needed to finish our tasks.In the past people takes all thee day to finish some chores,while, today we finish these tasks faster. For instance, because many people have full time jobs. Indeed, they need to do their chore easier and invention of fast kitchen machine makes food preparation an easy and faster mission. Apparently, it must be taken in consideration that workers today are happier with advent of technology.
Moreover,advertisement are more in our recent days. People are enjoying their spare time with a plethora of video games, outdoor playground, and extra. Furthermore, more relaxing and healthy equipment are used today which was not known before. For example, sports club have a plenty of ways and tools like swimming pools, dancing hall, and healthy nutrition programs . All these together help mankind to fell more happier. In view of the fact that healthy and enjoyable ways consequently leads to enhance and reinforce personage satisfaction.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, Taking all factors into considerations, I reinforce my idea that individuals today are more happier than in the past. Accordingly, I believe that we should keep our keen to invent more happier and beneficial modern technology methods and equipment for further satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29372937294 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94184162269 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7797077059 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178020255955 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532737030659 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643185161181 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106881796505 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745390891161 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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