Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Work has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways.
Although some people hold the point view that doing missions within a five days a week fir short hours are more comfortable. However others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me tp agree with the idea that working for three days for long hours are more relaxing and satisfaction. In the following essay i shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, working for half week only shall gives us enormous time to spend with our family. Family connection are in priority for most people and by having this spare days we can enjoy more with our family like playing games, doing exercise, and shopping. For instance, most stores close early at night during the week day. Indeed, this will left us no time to go for shopping if working five days. Apparently, it must be taken in consideration that most of kids need their parents care and attention regardless their age.
Moreover, working three days only will give opportunity to energize and work more efficiently in the other days. Everyday life is a challenging. Many tasks are hard to be done and need some of our attention and concentration. Hence we will have enough rest in the other days, this will contribute to increase our work performance. For example, every person working three days can be conscious to perform the tasks correctly, no matter if easy or hard. In view if the fact that more comfortable days will enhance our work performance.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, taking all factors into considerations, I reinforce my idea that working for three days long time are more satisfactory for people because will enjoy our family time and will perform our job more efficiently. Accordingly, i believe that our country achievement will be more influential if we give the workers extra relaxing and enjoying time
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...tly in the other days. Everyday life is a challenging. Many tasks are hard to be done and nee...
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...ome of our attention and concentration. Hence we will have enough rest in the other d...
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... our job more efficiently. Accordingly, i believe that our country achievement wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89149560117 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70034319212 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3261135635 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7894736842 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311218028864 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950337851665 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754860403757 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171524178243 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774921612873 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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