Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
News have an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate its effects on the society because of it's indelible impact on the world. Although some people hold the view point that wide variety of news resources can provide good knowledge about the surroundings. However, others hold a different intellect and may disagree with this notion. In my perception and actual life observation which has led me to agree with the idea that depending on one reliable source can provide a variety of information than many sorcess. In the following esaay, I shall delve into must outstanding reasons.
To commence with, many sources of news may distract us and bad to follow rather than depend on one authentic news channel. The news that are mostly supported by the government are asserts about a wide variety of information and dependable one. For instance, due to the recent conflicts in my back home country, many channels use to provide the information. However, the main reiable news never estimate any results till the exoperts of this organization be sure of its authenticity. Apparenetly, it must be taken into account that, other channel try to race and provide the news as first to its happening.
In addition, due to the competition between many company that mange these sources,they try to provide many news program to affect the people attitude and increase the percentage of the audiances and showing. Financial benefit come in some company priority, hence, they provide discussion that takes the people to no where and extra un useful programes. For example, in Iraq, my country, many new news channel in radio and televission and even social media come to the matket. These informative programe try to pull the people to their channel; therefore, they provide discussion news without any theeortical evidence of the information they provided. In view of the fact that, this action inforce them to do so, to increase the watching percentage people and inturn, increase their pecuniary income.
To sum up, after contemplating all the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I reinforce my idea that dependong on one resources will be more informed because of one dpendable news organization can provide authentice information and cover all of these inforamation from all aspects as well as this eill not distarct our concentration and others channels may give extra un useful knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
News have an enormous leverage on our quotidian r...
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Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
...erage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...luence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate ...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e of its indelible impact on the world. Although some people hold the view point that wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... in my back home country, many channels use to provide the information. However, th...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'many companies'.
Suggestion: many companies
...ddition, due to the competition between many company that mange these sources,they try to pr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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...en many company that mange these sources,they try to provide many news program to aff...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...mange these sources,they try to provide many news program to affect the people attit...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...mange these sources,they try to provide many news program to affect the people attitude a...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ide discussion that takes the people to no where and extra un useful programes. Fo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much new news', 'a good deal of new news'.
Suggestion: much new news; a good deal of new news
...ames. For example, in Iraq, my country, many new news channel in radio and televission and ev...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one resource', 'a resource', or simply 'resources'?
Suggestion: one resource; a resource; resources
..., I reinforce my idea that dependong on one resources will be more informed because of one dp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1140776699 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80344218853 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1768804327 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.055555556 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195817171183 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593167804614 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361101606569 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119059140842 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304416709926 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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