Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Last try:09/26/2019 07:01
Making a decision is an important and critical step in ever person's life. It has an emormous impact on our quotidian routin life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. it shape a person's idiology, prefernces, and life style. Although some people hold the pointview that young people in the past are more dependent because they start to work in early age to support their family financially. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal experience and actual observation of life had led mre to agree with the idea that youth in the recent decades are more independent and make their own decisions without asking their parent sopinion. In the following essay, I shall delve inot most outstanding reasons.
To begin with, our society teach those juvenile to be self-confidence and more responsible in their lives. The educational process have started to teach those individuals since their young age, how to manage and overcome the burden of life. For instance, my teenager son have been lear how to organize his time. He could use his time more efficiently to study, work, and participate in some activities.Later, he became more confidence and sure about all his decisions.When he decided to be a chief in a famous resturant that he use to work in as a part time, never back to our opinion and it was a right one. Apparently, in view of the fact that in our time it was hard to be so sure about our decisions.
In addition, youngsters today equip themselves with knowledge and skills to respond to the increase demands, challenges, and opportunities of global competitveness. They can easily make a decisions with presence of all the information from modern technology. For example, any information I need regards my school, I need to ask eitheR my parents or teachers. While, today the young people can gets all the information from the internet. Accordingly, they can make a steps forward and take any decisions because they are armed with all these inforamtion.
To sum up ,after contemplating the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I would reinforce mty idea that adolscents today are an excellent decisions maker due o the fact that our society teach them the principles to become more responsible on their own life and due to the presence of modern technology that helped a lot to provide all the information they need to participate in the comunituy as a responsible, confident persons.
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...he comunituy as a responsible, confident persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95465393795 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93596442498 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54415274463 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.9781307164 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269011635052 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723057538546 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614252812513 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148231741805 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684660756777 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.