Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Knowledge has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate the effects because it encompass our core and its undellible effects on the society. Although some people hold the view point that to be in touch with all information we need to follow many resources, However, others hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception and actual observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that, getting the aquintance better to befrom one dependable sources could be enogh to hold the aquired information we need it. In the following essay I shall delve inot the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, well known, fundamental channels can provide up to date information and be more reliable than many others. Competition between many channels to harvest as many as possible audience, make them to race each other to provide earlier informed news,in spite of some may be not dependable or confirmed. To be more specific, let me bonder over this point by one govemnet supported channel. In my country, and due to conflicts that takes place between ices and the people. Many hot news happen daily, this leds to many channel to come up and insteade of only 50 ones, now we have 1100 channels. It is ultimately hard to follow all of them. Besides, they try to be the winner of first adverised news but in fact, many news cant be reliable on. For instance, the number of people who killed in one explotion was exagurated by one small channel to mention it reachs 500 died, while in reality, al the citizen in this area never exceed 300 persons. Apparently, it must be taken inot account that, one reliable channels especially the one who supportedby the government will provide the most important information needed.
In addition, many information from many resources van led us to gets lost and mix the information. Furhtermore, it is important to mention her that, some channels try to show up and not authentic in information transfer. For instance, if the channel is newly develope, their expert try to attract people attention to them inoredr to increase their income. They will try to do sum funny joks on leaders or well-known people to bring more shower. Hence, more people watch, more finance gain to this channels. However, this channels joks, many of them are not real but this has its withdrawal on people attitude towards these person. For example, the last joks on president, Trump, that he have many financial problems and try to drug the country into pecuniary trap.
To sum up, after contemplating all the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that it is important to depend on one reliable channels to get information because it will transfer more authentic info and we will not loss our concentration in keeps looking for other alternative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...luence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate ...
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...ting the aquintance better to befrom one dependable sources could be enogh to hol...
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...rovide earlier informed news,in spite of some may be not dependable or confirmed....
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...In my country, and due to conflicts that takes place between ices and the people....
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much hot news', 'a good deal of hot news'.
Suggestion: Much hot news; A good deal of hot news
...akes place between ices and the people. Many hot news happen daily, this leds to many channel...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun channel seems to be countable; consider using: 'many channels'.
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...any hot news happen daily, this leds to many channel to come up and insteade of only 50 ones...
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...er of first adverised news but in fact, many news cant be reliable on. For instance,...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
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...nt information needed. In addition, many information from many resources van led...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...nt information needed. In addition, many information from many resources van led us to gets ...
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...more people watch, more finance gain to this channels. However, this channels joks, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...s withdrawal on people attitude towards these person. For example, the last joks on presiden...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89043824701 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71268885326 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535856573705 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8382311548 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.739130435 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8260869565 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86956521739 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205143304242 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561957562485 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547909724993 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114624817291 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473119625614 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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