Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?
Children have an influential and tremendous impact in our society. These generation needs huge care in how we raise, educate, and plant valuable morality. One of these value is to teach them how to understand and value the finance of their families.Although some people feels that it is good to give money for their children to enchourage them to study. Personally, I believe it is not a good idea for many reasons which will explore in this essay.
To begin with, giving children money when they get high grades will planted a characteristic of being money lovers. This afterward, will let them ask money for each task they do. like chores, shopping,and do extra school project.My son is a good example of this, His father try to enchourag him to study, when he start to give him money for each A marks he gets. Furthermore, my son starts ask for money for each chores he do liketake out the carbadge. This effect on his moral, he start do nothings only for money without care about others. When our family conflict with financial problems.he became nervous and refuse to help in any house chores.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...each task they do. like chores, shopping,and do extra school project.My son is a goo...
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Suggestion: starts
... try to enchourag him to study, when he start to give him money for each A marks he g...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A mark' or simply 'marks'?
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...hen he start to give him money for each A marks he gets. Furthermore, my son starts ask...
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... carbadge. This effect on his moral, he start do nothings only for money without car...
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...adge. This effect on his moral, he start do nothings only for money without care ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73056994819 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63037965921 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5499712973 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344536116918 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121634335234 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780821410793 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238002815775 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658747597336 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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