Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Communication now a day’s has an influential and a fabulous leverage on our daily life. It is utterly important to appreciate its indelible impact on our society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that communication by E mail is better because it will be more easy and convenient as the students no need to use transportation to meet with each other. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal experience and actual observation of life had led me to agree with the idea that in spite of the effortless method but its outcome not get with best result. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, face to face meeting to work on project will overcome each and every problems and discuss each point thoroughly. Each person had his own point of view and discuss in meeting can help to understand others opinion and convince them with this point. For instance, during my project on my senior year of study, me and my classmates were able to meet in the library for discussion, we were in the last week to submit our project. We found many point needs to corrected because we use social media to contact each other during the work time. However, we were able to add some important survey results that we found in one journal in the library. Furthermore, we add some ideas that we believe it will be helpful to boost our grades. Indeed, this method was very successful to get the higher grade.
In addition, using E- mail will take time to be sended and many times the internet are not effective which will affect our work. For example, for the same final project we were work on, my country, Iraq, was facing a conflict between the government and the people and many Iraqi peoples went out to the street to participate in a protest, The internet was shut down for five days. Hence we were working on the project, this was time consuming and affect our dead time to submit our works. The same problem other classmates faced too.
To sum up, Judging all the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I would reinforce the idea that it is absolutely important to work through meeting rather use the modern technology because the discussion will end with a better result and also will take less time to communicate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7299270073 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53136328801 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2156332859 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184321195251 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544093380722 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376845389549 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115315499848 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134351345539 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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