Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Education has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. Although some people hold the view point that university funds should be spend to enhance its extracurriculler activity rather than spend it to increase their professor wages. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In the following essay. I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, increase the lecturer income will encourage them to give more and spend extra time explaining the materials to the students. This will definitely increase their enthusiasm to the education.Indeed, this will consequently affect the student performance and achievement. For instance, they can answer any students questions even if it will take more time than the lecture actually is.
Moreover, increase the academic teacher's income will led to their thinking that hard working are get payed of. Furthermore, they consider these extra wages as rewards they deserve it. For example, the last demonstartion that taken place in Virginia carrying signs"Virginia is for learners.' asked to increase their salary because their hard works never gets rewarded. The government takes their complain into consideration. According to a mathmatical research about the percentage of pass degree with the increased salary of the professor in the past years. the result was surley, that salaer of the lecturer affect the education process dramatically. In view of the fact thatthey desrveto increase their salary as reward for their hard works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 247.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48178137652 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99872942656 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0844175536 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125607305208 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362261318906 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356874047042 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851951745385 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230866741939 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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