Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Family bounding have a great influence on our lives.Most of us listen to stories about his relatives either about their effect on society or their life experience.However, the question is, is our family still have a great impact on our life as in the past?some people believe that their extended family plays an important role as same effect on their parents.On the other hands, i feel this importance not as before as nowadays for many reasons i will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, most of us are living faraway a distance from their extended family because of study in universities,jobs, and have our own small families. my experience is a good example of this. as I travel to USA for study and my extended family still in back home and since I get acceptance in the school i was busy with my study and when my mom keep call me i answer her that i have no time to talk just normal talking and instead i can get benefit from this time by searching in internet fo my research, she was tell me when she get admitted to school at her time she was keep asking my grandfather to help her in her research since he is a famous writter.But she add today we are not in need for their help as before because we can find all the information in internet and actually even my grand grand father publishing i can get them by press one button.
In addition, all value of society is differ from before so their experience in past that we use to listen to it, todays is not helpful anymore.
my father is a good example of it, my father is a civil engineer and his father use to teach him how to act in front of his boss in work and should wear always a formal clothes and never answer "no icant"to him but nowadays as my father teach his son same ethics.on the other hands, my brother get no benefit from all these instruction but in opposite as everything is change and even my brother meet his boss only once and all their contact through E-mail.
In sum, although some people still believe extended family is still have same influence and importance as before. I personally feel this is not importance because of distance separate many family members and the society view to old experience is differ from present.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, still, i feel, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47921760391 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58204369128 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464547677262 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.669785113 48.9658058833 434% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.0 100.406767564 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.125 20.6045352989 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115356360489 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595893708887 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213339624198 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676113484087 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264514138088 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 11.7677419355 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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