scientific researches should be reveal or not. did you agree or disagree?
If the countries did not reveal their scientific researches, what is the benefit from doing it? The society has been dramatically changed to the best in many fields. This all belongs to new scientific discoveries that have been taken place during this era. The question is, are the goverments should reveals their resreaches or keep them in secret? I personally believe they should reveals them for many reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, scientific researches unit the nations to enhance human being life. This can be achieved in different fields economics, educational, transportation, and medical. For instance, the medical researches that have been taken place in 19 century lead to discovery of vaccines for different diseases. Each country try his best to add more acquaintance to this fied by doing more researches. In turn, mortality percentage gets reduced dramatically and people live more happily with their new generations. My grand grand father is a good example of this, he passed away since he was 4 years old because of tetanus. At that time no vaccine have been discovered. Later on, when Germany announce the great discovery to cure and prvent this disease. It was really a new sunshine came to all people lives including my grand father. He adds that when his father dies with this disease he was left with fair in side him that may be get the same fate. But, nevertheless, his thought was wrong because of reveal this new scientific research.
In addition, reveal new researches wii motivate our youngsters to increase their productivities. As all known, todays all youth concern about their video games and how to spend their spare times in un usefull way. Announce of such researches will enthusiastic them to be more creative. My son is one of many spends his time watching youtubes and playing video games. Mw and my husband try our best to enchourage him to work on some space project because its his favrouble field. We keep take him to space museums, but still never motivated. Last reveals about space trip of china to the lunner part of moon( the darkest face) and the new researches that will take place on this part particularly helped him to search and study more about space wich felt me happy that my son will become part of this in the future.
In sum, I believe its very important to reveal for new researches for motivate the young people and increase their productivity besides, enhance human life in all fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, thus, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87264150943 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62621922388 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554245283019 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8874293613 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16199304223 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514725781728 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060274893791 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105622803032 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425926295278 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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