Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education effects society in different way. The most prominent effect is to build a highly intelligent generations. The start point should be from early age because their minds can get information so quickly and almost rarely forgot it "education at young as carving in stone." someone said. accordingly, i strongly agree that learning in early age is if significant importance that the government should gives attention and funds this process as it's priority for several reasons.
To begin with, the young age children have huge enthusiasim to learn. We as society hand by hand with the government can use this valuable charecteristic in building a wide and strong smart generation. All know according to the researches on education field found that the IQ of the kids that attend schools in early age are higher than those attending in late age.Moreover, theos are the higher percentage of students who continue their higher education and attending universities. Contrastly, the later are mostly stop education till high school as they loose their enthusiasm.
In addition, government can harvest their intelligence and get benifit in the future. Eventually, the reputation of this nation besides the inventions in many field like medical, educational, and tecnological all will be due to those generation. As example, lastly we notice many countries government fund special programe fore young age from 4- 10 years old. These programe include competiotn between them in many educational fields especially math and science. The first five winners can get admition in special schools funded by the govenmrnt with especial equipments and learning devides that used to increase those generation learning. In turn, their countrie will be get benefit from them by well reputatio; furthermore, they can make researches and invent new invention that increase the econmy of their countires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, well, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42905405405 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9607530648 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6970875507 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116151786237 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408986833991 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328648685256 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079764729753 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155365784394 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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